HoodyupStudious's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Coma]

Sharp thing.

The sharp thing can be found as a hook back at Pete's dad.

[Astro Warrior - Asteroid]

Not Satisfying =/

Graphics 1/10

Since you ripped it, I can assume that small effort was put into this work, or it lacks creativity. The graphics are retro which is nice but it was all dull and static.

Sound and SFX 0/10

Buddy, the golden rule for any flash game or animation to get some good reception is sound effects or at least a music, this lacks it so yeah, you should try browsing the Audio Portal, they got very good techno music for this (^_-)

Concept and Originality 3/10

IMO, this concept of avoiding Asteroid is pretty old and boring unless epic effort and effects was put, the concept itself is clearly known widely so you get zero for Originality with no modification.

Organization and Presentation 5/10

The presentation is sort of neat, but it still lack effort, you should put more into it, maybe spend some time drawing a proper layouts, at least make an attractive menu eh?

Generally, good job on doing this and learning something new, also applying it, but if you want some hardasscore score you should do more for the viewers.
And to be honest, me as a gamer, I didn't enjoy playing this, good luck next time
^_^

~Mkemaster

Lord-Shaitan responds:

Thanks for the tips!
I'm starting this game again from the scratch, doing the graphics on my own and adding sound effects and more stuff.
This on was to just test the code, so i didn't put much time on other stuff.
When the new game is done, i'll give yoou a heads up!